Appraising my rough cut

Sound in the rough cut.

The sound within the rough cut had clear dialogue but that was about as good got in terms of sound during the rough cut because there was no music to blend shot to shot well and also the music would have made the dialogue fit better together to make it smoother so that is something ill pay attention to in sequence,
there was also no ambient noises within the rough cut so the realism of the sequence had no effect here, killing the atmosphere and lastly in my rough cut i had no vfx sounds for things like the book moving.

Visual effects in the rough cut

In the rough cut we had only one visual effect just due to time being focused on the filming and the sequence we lacked in time to get more visual effects, however with that factor we did manage to fit in one fantastic vfx of will getting duplicated multiple times within one shot that had no errors in it, the areas of different wills fit well and had no lines were areas were chopped next to one another, so this was a very successful piece within the sequence hopefully the other vfx will be the same.

The rough cut sequence its self

the sequence its self was rather poor to be honest because it lacked sound in areas and some had no sound at all, also i included footage that was meant to be a vfx so it looked ridiculous in the rough cut, and lastly the sequence was not even finished and cut short at around 1:30 so it needs more footage within the clip,

apart from that i liked the shots we had in it and the seamless areas were shots blended from one to the other with out it being to jumpy and seeming that shots went on too long so the shot types them self were brilliant and i cant wait to fix the other problems to get the finished product looking much better