improved shot 1, scene 1
this shot was greatly needing improvement from the rule of thirds being broken and it not being either symmetrical or having a reason behind it, in the new shot it is at an angle and keeping at a lower angle to see the characters scene more in depth and getting closer to the dialoge to be more engaged.
improved shot 2, scene 1
shot 2 was originally breaking the 180 degree rule so it had to be re-shot no matter what, but with that chance we added loads new elements to improve it, like straightening the tables and getting the shot symmetrical as before the two group members had a timed shot so couldn't judge it as well as they could have. also the lighting is more friendly and a lot less stinging to the eyes.
improved shot 3, scene 2
improved shot 3 was highly more improved in terms of the rules of thirds, because now the sides of the hall lead up to where the feet of the characters are, so are guided to look at them even though they are a focal point this adds to the effect of leading up to them, also the long shot was done better because the feet made it into the shot and gives off where they are heading instead of them standing still.
improved shot 4, scene 2
in shot 4 the angle was changed to make the shot better in so many ways like the factor that you follow the framing along to see the characters.
the angle also shows less background and focus' so much more on the characters and making it valid that they are the point of intrest not the background.
and lastly the angle show off more where the characters are heading towards the movement is increased in terms of where they are heading.
improved shot 5, scene 3
this shot was one that needed to most improved to because the characters were so far away and the scene was full of junk, e.g posters and extra chairs, etc.
also the lighting was terrible because a sudden sharp beam scrapes the top of the shot and gives off terrible unwanted flare.
also here we have a shot that had way to much unwanted and unneeded background, it also had the angle changed to give off an improvement on were the characters are heading also the headmaster is leading the walk which is more natural.






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